Thursday, 27 July 2017

term 2 relfection

Term 2 reflection
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 writing
What I learnt in term 2 in writing was to learn my spelling words and to do the spelling
Days. Example.
Day 1 pre test with a buddy
Day 2 look,say,cover and write plus write each word with a dictionary definition
Day 3 look,say,cover and write plus write each word in a compound sentence
Day 4 look,say,cover and write plus write each word in a question
Day 5 post test with a buddy
And I learnt lots of words because of our school spelling words.
What I am proud of in term 2 in writing was that I have put lots of detail in my writing
Most of the time. What I found challenging in writing was to practise my writing goal
Because I completely forgot about my writing goal. I just remembered about my 'must do' at the
Top of the checklist. What I will focus more on next term is to practise my writing goal
Much more.
                                              Reading
What I learnt in term 2 in reading was to always do your follow up in reading because
If you don’t, you have to do the follow up when the workshop is on. So I have learnt that
This term. What I was proud of in term 2 was that I practised my reading goal because I didn’t want to be sad that I didn't finish my follow up. So I am very proud of myself also my
Dad is very proud of me as well. What I found challenging in reading was to read aloud to everyone except my Dad because he is the person I feel comfortable with reading aloud to. Next
Time I will read more to people that I’m not comfortable with so it builds my
Confidence up.
Maths
What I learnt in maths in term 2 was all my times tables because as a class we did basic facts together so everyone would learn them. What I was proud of in term 2 was that I
Finished all my maths inquiry because I know some people that haven’t finished but
That's not me! What I found challenging in term 2 was to finish all my sums in the basic facts
Sheet because I need to learn my times tables faster so I can finish all my times tables
On the basic facts sheet. Next time I will try my hardest to practise my times tables.
Because then I will be faster and alway finish my basic facts sheet.

Friday, 23 June 2017

camp recount

WALT was to have structure to my story
camp recount
I was with Cassidy and Mackenzie doing the burma trail because I wanted to have an awesome time. We were screaming in horror at all the scary things. In the adventure at first I was walking peacefully thinking ‘’What’s so scary about a burma trail?’’
1. All your friends are with you.
2. You have your torch if you are scared of the dark but if you don’t you can just look
Up to the stars Walking on the muddy, steep trail,everything was fine until i heard a rustle in the bush.I took a closer look -nothing to be seen. What was that creature in the bush?But when I took another step and heard a dark scream and then another. I got butterflies In my tummy .Are an scary episode scary move after another seeing all these scary Faces that i never met in my dreams.yeah!! Its finally the end. BOO!! AHH!! We all
Screamed together. We all had a heart attack. What a creepy night          


Tuesday, 20 June 2017

show not tell


The elderly lion was tried, waiting to be rescued from his lonely life on the gloomy grasslands. The sad,dark sky stanted to cry but the lion was oblivious to the weather and did nothing but cry and feel lonely. Sadness darkened his day feeling nothing but scared and dumped. Wind whipped his blond hair waving around. Bucket fulls of water patting on his damp head. Feeling a twist of sadness.

Thursday, 15 June 2017

the flying book

Image result for a flying bookIn the moonlight when the library is dead silent, the bird flutters down off the old fashioned bird shelf. The bird lands softly with a muffled thud and lies on the dusty carpet floor, waiting for the next day to arrive.

Monday, 8 May 2017

The 2 super heros

The two super heroes
Chapter 1
resource imageThese two powerful old superheroes dreaming away in their sleep were fanatic about saving the world.Also there were impeccably dressed. These two old people are called Molly and George and had a lifetime of saving lives. Day after day they had battled the streets, fighting criminals that they loathe and protecting our people from the clutches of evil. Now, their lives are slightly less busy with crimes and danger and a bit drab as they have left saving the world to younger superheroes to battle the villians. They found it too gruelling and they feel no remorse. However, they still have the energy for missions but they are now old, tired, sleepy superheros nowadays. Ring ring the phone began to ring, waking up the superheros from their magical sleep. But finally they woke up with a shock and fright. George staggered across the musty grey mat with his pretty golden slippers shining. He grabbed the phone with his unsteady hand, wobbling and shaking in his cold hands. He put his hairy ear near to the red ruby  phone waiting for a voice to come out. Suddenly a young teenage voice was screaming for help saying, ‘Help help!! Joker is obliterating the city again with his evil villain plans and revolting potions.luring people into his sly traps. Please come soon to Oratia District school -please come in time! Good bye.’ Beep beep!! went the phone deafening George’s ear. So he dashed to Molly, deep in her sleep snoring away and woke her up to save the world.         


Friday, 5 May 2017


Alice in wonder land

resource imageDown, down, down Alice went, deeper and deeper into the rabbit hole dream. This had to be a dream. Feeling scared of wondering what would happen next. It seemed like she had been falling for hours as if time had slowed down.The fragments of dust and light filling the air. Alice opened her mouth to scream. Lots of echos repeat the same voice of a gentle scared little girl. She had screamed for her family, so they would save her. But they didn’t save little Alice from the never ending fall. The hot air of the dust mixed with books flowing into her mouth. She could almost taste the scent of the ancient books. Of course it was never ending, For hours she was sinking down in the thin air.The next moment Alice landed on the wetness of the muddy grass. She was looking up at a bright blue sky with blobs of white floating clouds.From the corner of her eye she caught sight of a house. It looked familiar.Forgetting how life was happy exciting bright and lots of laughs with her family, she staggered, struggling to stand up right. Daylight was fading and the moon was rising .Seeing the moon was a dream for Alice, always hoping to see the floating moon of a huge set zooming across the earth before 7.00pm, but she never did. Now her dream was came true in life.


Monday, 1 May 2017

Reflection term 1 2017

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Term 1 reflection 2017

Writing
This term in literacy I learnt that I have set up my spelling book really well so now it is easier for people to read. I am proud of this term in literacy that my handwriting is much neater because last year my handwriting was horrible so it is so easier to read my own work and to understand more. Also the teachers can read my writing now.I found challenging in writing was to make more interesting topics and stories . Because I don’t get many ideas in my head so I need more inspiration.Next term I will write more of my spelling words and word of the days in my writing books because then my stories will be better.

Maths
This term I learnt in maths some new strategies that Miss Coles taught the whole class- to use a positive number line and expanded place value partitioning. I am proud this term in maths with maths inquiry because it's fun and challenging at the same time. Also what I like in maths inquiry was how you get to do to the reflection in maths inquiry because you look back at it and you see how much you have learnt in the past. I found doing those two maths inquiry extensions (The Anna maths inquiry and Sir Edmund Hillary inquiry) challenging this term which was all about meters so it was pretty hard for me. Next term I will do the extensions to push my learning because I didn’t do those two extensions last term so next term I will do it.

Reading

This term what I learnt in reading was that David Walliams' books are really good for me to read because now I really like reading because of those books.This term what I found challenging was to become a more confident reader aloud to other people and that was my goal but l haven’t achieved it yet because we didn’t look at our goals at all because we were too busy. This term I am proud that I understand more words in books because of the words of the day and spelling words from Danks Davis and also spelling words in school. Next term I will read more to my Dad and myself at home and at school because that means I can spend more time practicing to be a more confident reader aloud to my Dad and other people.

script writing

the three little pigs
date wednesday 30 november 2016

Ext: MOTHER PIGS HOUSE-EARLY IN MORNING 10-O'CLOCK

Little pigs have grown up and can't live in mother's house every more they are too big to live in the  house

MOTHER PIG
(crying)
Oh my darling piggies i am so sad that you are leaving you need to build  your own houses because this house is too big for all of us

LAZY PIG
(complaining)
Oh mum why do all of us need to go i want to stay with you i'll miss you baking the food for me and doing the washing.

SCARED PIG
(complaining)
No mum there are too many wolves in our country i need to stay with you whole life because your super mum. i need so many hugs and teddy bears i need all the hugs in the world mum can i have a hug?

MOTHER PIG
Okay

MOTHER PIG gave another hug to the SCARED PIG

SCARED PIG
(asking-complaining)
No another hug please!

MOTHER PIG
No you can't have every hug i have to give some other hugs to your brothers sorry

MOTHER PIG goes around hugging her other sons

BRIGHT PIG
No mum i don't need to have a hug i`m too old for that kind of stuff you're embarrassing me Mum

MOTHER PIG
Goodbye my lovely children see you on sunday for a picnic

CHILDREN PIGS
Bye mum can we have a group hug
Group hug with the pigs

by lucia & kyla

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