Monday, 18 September 2017
the sadness lion in the world.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Dear Crazy chocolate man
WALT have more structure to my stories. Dear Crazy chocolate man Today its a very Import day because it is my happy cheerful birthday toda...
-
The elderly lion was tried, waiting to be rescued from his lonely life on the gloomy grasslands. The sad,dark sky stanted to cry but the l...
-
WALT is to have structure to my speeches and for the teacher to see what level I am for speeches. Dear Department of Conservation, Why l ...
Hi Lucia, maybe you could go back and check your spelling because when you said that the lion was tired at the start you wrote tried not tired.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used lots of describing words to tell us how the lion was feeling.
Come and check out my blog! https://odstessah.blogspot.com/