Tuesday 31 October 2017

cameo

Sake
He curls around in the tree and stares at you in the eye.
Thinking that he is going to hypnotise your brain.
He slides through the damp dirt, covered in lush green leaves.
He’s a quick twist of terror.
He’s the colour of the rainforest.

He is a scary worm with venom.

1 comment:

  1. I like how you discribed the worm really well but next time you could put in what the walt of the work was and I like how you added lots of punktuation into your cameo
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