camp recount

WALT was to have structure to my story
camp recount

I was with Cassidy and Mackenzie doing the burma trail because I wanted to have an awesome time. We were screaming in horror at all the scary things. In the adventure at first I was walking peacefully thinking ‘’What’s so scary about a burma trail?’’

1. All your friends are with you.

2. You have your torch if you are scared of the dark but if you don’t you can just look

Up to the stars Walking on the muddy, steep trail,everything was fine until i heard a rustle in the bush.I took a closer look -nothing to be seen. What was that creature in the bush?But when I took another step and heard a dark scream and then another. I got butterflies In my tummy .Are an scary episode scary move after another seeing all these scary Faces that i never met in my dreams.yeah!! Its finally the end. BOO!! AHH!! We all

Screamed together. We all had a heart attack. What a creepy night          

show not tell

The elderly lion was tried, waiting to be rescued from his lonely life on the gloomy grasslands. The sad,dark sky stanted to cry but the lion was oblivious to the weather and did nothing but cry and feel lonely. Sadness darkened his day feeling nothing but scared and dumped. Wind whipped his blond hair waving around. Bucket fulls of water patting on his damp head. Feeling a twist of sadness.

the flying book

In the moonlight when the library is dead silent, the bird flutters down off the old fashioned bird shelf. The bird lands softly with a muffled thud and lies on the dusty carpet floor, waiting for the next day to arrive.