WALT was to have structure to my story
camp recount
camp recount
I was with Cassidy and Mackenzie doing the burma trail because I wanted to have an awesome time. We were screaming in horror at all the scary things. In the adventure at first I was walking peacefully thinking ‘’What’s so scary about a burma trail?’’
1. All your friends are with you.
2. You have your torch if you are scared of the dark but if you don’t you can just look
Up to the stars Walking on the muddy, steep trail,everything was fine until i heard a rustle in the bush.I took a closer look -nothing to be seen. What was that creature in the bush?But when I took another step and heard a dark scream and then another. I got butterflies In my tummy .Are an scary episode scary move after another seeing all these scary Faces that i never met in my dreams.yeah!! Its finally the end. BOO!! AHH!! We all
Screamed together. We all had a heart attack. What a creepy night
that was a very descriptive story lucia, I loved it! but I found a sneaky lowercase 'I' in there:)
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