Tuesday 20 June 2017

show not tell


The elderly lion was tried, waiting to be rescued from his lonely life on the gloomy grasslands. The sad,dark sky stanted to cry but the lion was oblivious to the weather and did nothing but cry and feel lonely. Sadness darkened his day feeling nothing but scared and dumped. Wind whipped his blond hair waving around. Bucket fulls of water patting on his damp head. Feeling a twist of sadness.

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