WALT is to have more structure to this story.
I was munching on my apple but the apple didn't agree with me today. Ow!! my tooth. But I just kept on munching on my delicious juicy apple. Suddenly I stopped and felt my tooth and it was really wiggly now. Should I pull it out or leave it? umm.......
I think I should pull it out because-
1. Because of the money that I will get from the tooth fairy.
2. It would stop the pain from my tooth.
3. So it won't annoy me in the night.
Next I yanked it out with my hand but my hand wasn't strong enough to take it out. After that I twisted it back and forth also twisting it around. Until finally it popped out with blood bursting out of my gum as the pain faded away.
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