The elderly lion was tired, waiting to be rescued from his lonely life on the gloomy grasslands. The sad,dark sky started to cry but the lion was oblivious to the weather and did nothing but cry and feel lonely. Sadness darkened his day feeling nothing but scared and dumped. Wind whipped his blond hair waving it around. Full buckets of water patting on his damp head. Feeling a twist of sadness.
Monday 18 September 2017
the sadness lion in the world.
The elderly lion was tired, waiting to be rescued from his lonely life on the gloomy grasslands. The sad,dark sky started to cry but the lion was oblivious to the weather and did nothing but cry and feel lonely. Sadness darkened his day feeling nothing but scared and dumped. Wind whipped his blond hair waving it around. Full buckets of water patting on his damp head. Feeling a twist of sadness.
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Hi Lucia, maybe you could go back and check your spelling because when you said that the lion was tired at the start you wrote tried not tired.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used lots of describing words to tell us how the lion was feeling.
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